https://teachingwriting.blogger.de/ This Blog was created as part of my term paper within the university course "Teaching Writing" at JLU. It is supposed to be an example for an online Blog project for students of grade 11 at secondary schools. Blogger.de exampleforyou 2014-08-13T12:29:49Z en hourly 1 2000-01-01T00:00:00Z https://teachingwriting.blogger.de/stories/2426840/comments/2426843/ Hey, this was a very thoughtful and well considered entry. I really like the fact that you are worried about this situation and honour all the people who died. Nevertheless, you should focus on your punctuation in the last line. Furthermore, I am not completely sure whether you are allowed to say "fire at the airplane". You should check that again. Moreover, it would be very interesting if you could add some more information concerning this whole conflict and war in the Ukraine. Maybe you could also... Blogger.de exampleforyou Copyright © 2014 exampleforyou 2014-08-13T12:22:24Z https://teachingwriting.blogger.de/stories/2426840/ At the moment there are countless conflicts happening in several parts of our planet. A thing that made me personal reflect on what humans are able to do to each other is the launch of a passenger plane high above the Ukraine some weeks ago. On board of this plane were 298 people. Many families, doctors and last but not least more than 80 children died during this horrible crime. All of them have been on their ways home, to an AIDS conference or to their summer vacation. Maybe you ask yourself now... Blogger.de exampleforyou Copyright © 2014 exampleforyou 2014-08-13T12:09:43Z Search this site: q https://teachingwriting.blogger.de/search